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ahmet yılmaz · February 17, 2013, 12:56:59 PM

This is mine new personal work.Hope you like it

I used for modeling 3d max,rendering keyshot.
Final photoshop retouch version...

Firstly keyshot render..

Photoshop phases...

EGON · February 17, 2013, 06:16:26 PM

Nice work. But needs work on the windows.

ahmet yılmaz · February 18, 2013, 03:51:45 AM

Thanks

You're right, window reflection could have been better than...

schneich · February 18, 2013, 05:56:19 AM

depth of field looks unrealistic, too much vignetting, you loose a lot of detail in the shadows....

nice modelling though....

cheers

t.

tsunami · February 18, 2013, 09:18:33 AM

The car is nice, but i think is not matching with backplate, because car seems too much small than around objects.
That's maybe because it's has a semi tilt effect, that make car as a toy car..
regards

ahmet yılmaz · February 18, 2013, 12:29:14 PM

tsunami did not escape the eyes of your

Right! But otherwise car would not have been nicely aligned into the render frame?

schneich
"you loose a lot of detail in the shadows..." Compared to the first render.Which details lost???

Thanks for helpfull critical comments

schneich · February 18, 2013, 02:04:38 PM

in the shadows...

tsunami · February 18, 2013, 02:21:21 PM

Quote from: ahmet yılmaz on February 18, 2013, 12:29:14 PM
tsunami did not escape the eyes of your
Right! But otherwise car would not have been nicely aligned into the render frame?

schneich
"you loose a lot of detail in the shadows..." Compared to the first render.Which details lost???

Thanks for helpfull critical comments

Ahmet dont' get mad at critical comments, because them are made to improve work...

..and u should be happy, because sometime many posts here don't get any comments...also if are nice works

..and your work got them...soooo...
I always like image with high contrast, if u take a look on some of my work you will see it...so i like your..but i would try to change something as i told u before..; and maybe i should try also to change hdri environment, and light setup..and try to give some tires weight,..cutting them a bit with a plane..
Regards

ahmet yılmaz · February 18, 2013, 03:49:09 PM

schneich you're right but that is little detail lose... İ think more realistically than first render

Thanks tsunami...
but misunderstood me i'm already happy for comments

i said in my comments why i had made that... that's all

Josh3D · February 19, 2013, 07:22:08 AM

I love this car and the direction you're going with the scene. I would definitely bookmark this post from Tim Feher though, everyone should