Rubber Watches

[John82389]

Modeled in solidworks. Rendered in keyshot. Please let me know any & all suggestions on how I can improve the renderings.

-Jonathan F

[Josh3D]

Hi Jonathan! Welcome.

Great design on the watches. The plastic looks pretty good to me, but you lose the white one in the bg. I'm not sure if it's the resolution, but the watch face (label I assume?) stands out a bit. May want to dial that down a little bit.

On the rims, I'd take the bg image out, or lighten it and up the brightness as you loose some detail on the dark side of those beauties.

On the radial engine, the sunburst is a bit distracting. The lighting looks great. Could use less of a polished, new look. perhaps some textures on it?

Great work. Looking forward to seeing more.

[John82389]

You're absolutely right, it's important not to lose the white models against the white background. I need more contrast, thanks! Now with the propellor sunburst flare, I agree that it just doesn't belong. Always helps with another persons eye.