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Gallery => Amazing Shots => Topic started by: jissididi on January 17, 2015, 01:59:33 PM

Title: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: jissididi on January 17, 2015, 01:59:33 PM
hey ! there is just too much cars in here lets get off the ground !!
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: Will Gibbons on January 17, 2015, 03:27:34 PM
Nice. I like. It is cool to see some variety  ;)
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: PhilippeV8 on January 17, 2015, 09:33:39 PM
Couldn't agree more ! ;)
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: Esben Oxholm on January 17, 2015, 10:31:22 PM
True! And very nice plane.
The background seem a bit blown out though. Try to make it less bright if you can :)
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: jissididi on January 18, 2015, 02:17:15 AM
well the render didn't seem that cool without the bright background ... here is the original :
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: Esben Oxholm on January 18, 2015, 04:22:45 AM
Yeah, I see that the plane gets pretty dark. Maybe you can add a soft pin light to your hdri to put some light on the plane...

Uh, and also get the propeller spinning with some nice motion blur :)
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: Will Gibbons on January 18, 2015, 07:00:24 AM
That's a nice looking backplate btw.
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: jissididi on January 18, 2015, 07:36:21 AM
how's that ?
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Post by: Josh3D on January 18, 2015, 07:38:07 AM
Oooooh yeah, that is great.
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Post by: feher on January 18, 2015, 07:46:16 AM
Loving that last one ! Great seeing the progression from one to the next.
Push it more !!!!!!! Draw us in to the image.
Tim
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: PhilippeV8 on January 18, 2015, 10:36:38 PM
How 'bout these tips:

1- added some vignetting
2- removed the blue on the white stripes over the main fuselage
3- added dust swirls
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: Josh3D on January 19, 2015, 04:08:40 AM
Looks better without that blue. Vignetting is a tad heavy--was great to see the detail/shape of the entire plane. Vignette takes that away just a little.
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: PhilippeV8 on January 19, 2015, 04:52:04 AM
Ok .. agreed on the vignetting :)
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: jissididi on January 19, 2015, 05:54:28 AM
YEP!  Very good idea the smoke!
Working on an air battle with some more other planes keep you in touch!
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: jissididi on January 25, 2015, 07:10:47 AM
So I've been working on this plane since the previous post,
German one, WW2, Focke Wulf 190 D-9
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: jissididi on January 25, 2015, 07:13:19 AM
And as I didn't want to let him alone, I decided to make another render and give it some more action !
Title: Re: WHAT ABOUT PLANES ?
Post by: jissididi on January 25, 2015, 07:27:14 AM
here with some post prod