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Title: McLaren P1 working hard to improve.
Post by: Shubham_Kapoor on July 22, 2015, 06:31:13 AM
Hello again!
I am trying to improve myself more and more, rendering every single day. The one's I think are somewhat nice I post them.
I do a lot of mistakes in my renders but hey mistakes teach us. So here's McLaren P1 rocking some Vorsteiner VSM-313.

HDR made in Photoshop CC
Post Pro in Photoshop and Lightroom.

The model has some serious geometry issues. Lighting may not be perfect or even good. So suggestions are welcomed.
Title: Re: McLaren P1 working hard to improve.
Post by: Josh3D on July 22, 2015, 07:51:16 AM
It's a great shot, but yeah, that geometry is all kinds of tessellated.
Title: Re: McLaren P1 working hard to improve.
Post by: Angelo on July 22, 2015, 10:44:23 AM
can you fix it? great render tho
Title: Re: McLaren P1 working hard to improve.
Post by: Shubham_Kapoor on July 22, 2015, 05:03:25 PM
Quote from: Angelo on July 22, 2015, 10:44:23 AM
can you fix it? great render tho
Yeah may be . Glad you liked it.
Title: Re: McLaren P1 working hard to improve.
Post by: Shubham_Kapoor on July 22, 2015, 05:05:36 PM
Quote from: Josh Mings on July 22, 2015, 07:51:16 AM
It's a great shot, but yeah, that geometry is all kinds of tessellated.
I will make sure that next time I use a well modeled geometry.
Happy Birthday  though, You know time zones and stuff  ;)
Title: Re: McLaren P1 working hard to improve.
Post by: feher on July 22, 2015, 06:37:40 PM
I'm only looking at the lighting and the shapes you are pulling out of you vehicle.
Some really nice work ! The wheels have some depth to them rotor is not trying to grab attention over the wheel. Nice !
Tires need some love.
But as a whole this has a nice mood. Keep up the great work.
Tim
Title: Re: McLaren P1 working hard to improve.
Post by: Shubham_Kapoor on July 22, 2015, 06:57:50 PM
Quote from: feher on July 22, 2015, 06:37:40 PM
I'm only looking at the lighting and the shapes you are pulling out of you vehicle.
Some really nice work ! The wheels have some depth to them rotor is not trying to grab attention over the wheel. Nice !
Tires need some love.
But as a whole this has a nice mood. Keep up the great work.
Tim
Surely sir I will try to improve more and more. Love to hear from you. Some constructive criticism is all a student needs.