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Title: Audi RS6 2015
Post by: Shubham_Kapoor on September 18, 2015, 06:05:57 AM
Hey, So here's a new one Audi RS6 2015.
Getting myself ready for a portfolio and for Humster 3d Challenge very excited.

Hdri generated by sun&sky in Keyshot.
Any questions for this, I am More than glad to answer.

Criticisms are super welcome.
Title: Re: Audi RS6 2015
Post by: TpwUK on September 18, 2015, 06:29:47 AM
This looks pretty good Shubham, the critique i have is that the sun spot on the bonnet looks too small to me, but i could be wrong :)

Martin
Title: Re: Audi RS6 2015
Post by: Shubham_Kapoor on September 18, 2015, 06:32:10 AM
Quote from: TpwUK on September 18, 2015, 06:29:47 AM
This looks pretty good Shubham, the critique i have is that the sun spot on the bonnet looks too small to me, but i could be wrong :)

Martin
It's not a sun spot, It was a shiny part on the sheet  metal so I created a little flare on it :D
Title: Re: Audi RS6 2015
Post by: Josh3D on September 18, 2015, 09:48:54 AM
Your composition has improved so much. This looks great Shubham.
Title: Re: Audi RS6 2015
Post by: Shubham_Kapoor on September 18, 2015, 09:54:09 AM
Quote from: Josh Mings on September 18, 2015, 09:48:54 AM
Your composition has improved so much. This looks great Shubham.
Thank You very much Josh. Also Thank You for the last featured post on facebook and other social media, that was my dream come true. :D
Title: Re: Audi RS6 2015
Post by: Will Gibbons on September 21, 2015, 07:33:46 AM
Yeah, great work!

My feedback:

I'd touch up the road paint (white line) in the shadowed area. Looks a bit artifact-y... I'd just match the motion blur look you've achieved outside the shadow. Also, Maybe a bit more of a contrasting/interesting highlights/reflections on the hood? I know your rendering is probably really accurate as there's not much to reflect in the sky... just thinking of ways to make it a bit more dynamic.

Great work!
Title: Re: Audi RS6 2015
Post by: Shubham_Kapoor on September 21, 2015, 08:52:27 AM
Quote from: willgibbonsdesign on September 21, 2015, 07:33:46 AM
Yeah, great work!

My feedback:

I'd touch up the road paint (white line) in the shadowed area. Looks a bit artifact-y... I'd just match the motion blur look you've achieved outside the shadow. Also, Maybe a bit more of a contrasting/interesting highlights/reflections on the hood? I know your rendering is probably really accurate as there's not much to reflect in the sky... just thinking of ways to make it a bit more dynamic.

Great work!
That's my favourite type of criticism thanks a lot for that and true that sometimes renders should be more interesting than accurate :D
Title: Re: Audi RS6 2015
Post by: Arian Shamil on September 21, 2015, 02:04:17 PM
Nice! :)
Love the colors and comps too! :)
Title: Re: Audi RS6 2015
Post by: Shubham_Kapoor on September 21, 2015, 08:00:52 PM
Quote from: Arian Shamil on September 21, 2015, 02:04:17 PM
Nice! :)
Love the colors and comps too! :)
Thank you Arian! I will do more renders once my exams get finished.