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Gallery => Amazing Shots => Topic started by: Mahmoud on September 23, 2015, 01:00:23 PM

Title: Laraki Epitome II
Post by: Mahmoud on September 23, 2015, 01:00:23 PM
Thank you everybody for the critics and the advices i tried to improve my work here is the  new render i hope you like it ;)
waiting for your feedback   ;)
Check the full project here BEHANCE (all passess included) : https://www.behance.net/gallery/29711765/Laraki-Epitome (https://www.behance.net/gallery/29711765/Laraki-Epitome)
Title: Re: Laraki Epitome II
Post by: TpwUK on September 23, 2015, 01:07:20 PM
A much better angle than the first render you did with this model, the one thing that stands out a mile though, if the sand is soft enough to leave foot prints in then there should be tyre tracks too. Other than that you have done pretty well really :)

Martin
Title: Re: Laraki Epitome II
Post by: Mahmoud on September 23, 2015, 01:34:02 PM
Quote from: TpwUK on September 23, 2015, 01:07:20 PM
A much better angle than the first render you did with this model, the one thing that stands out a mile though, if the sand is soft enough to leave foot prints in then there should be tyre tracks too. Other than that you have done pretty well really :)

Martin

Thanks to you and your advices ;) i tried to add some  tyre tracks here but i think they look fake ( they need so much work" XD anyways thank you again, your advices are really helpful :D
Title: Re: Laraki Epitome II
Post by: SergioBL on September 23, 2015, 02:40:12 PM
Yeah! this image is a lot better! And don't stop there, please add the tire track :)
Title: Re: Laraki Epitome II
Post by: Will Gibbons on September 26, 2015, 08:27:28 AM
Nice so far!

I'd just ask why it's on sand. Nobody who'd own this car would drive it on sand... so I'd say find a backplate that makes sense and you'll be off to the races!
Title: Re: Laraki Epitome II
Post by: Mahmoud on September 26, 2015, 03:34:29 PM
Quote from: willgibbonsdesign on September 26, 2015, 08:27:28 AM
Nice so far!

I'd just ask why it's on sand. Nobody who'd own this car would drive it on sand... so I'd say find a backplate that makes sense and you'll be off to the races!

I want some challenge  :D lol i will do another render with a good backplate !!! Thank you
Title: Re: Laraki Epitome II
Post by: Will Gibbons on September 28, 2015, 12:20:11 PM
It's all personal preference, so take my comments with a grain of salt. This isn't 'bad', I just ask because I think it's the first question a viewer might ask. keep working at it though!