I like the more dark one but i like the one with some good colors.
So I could't choose which one was the best so i upload both then you can choose you'r favorit image.
Render: Keyshot
Post: Photoshop/Lightroom
the model i got from Nils Piirma so ty you!
You're losing the details on the dark one. On the lighter one a bit too. Pulling the details out of that grill and the headlamps would may this great. Blurring the background may help and not make it so distracting.
Quote from: Josh Mings on January 18, 2016, 08:12:21 AM
You're losing the details on the dark one. On the lighter one a bit too. Pulling the details out of that grill and the headlamps would may this great. Blurring the background may help and not make it so distracting.
sounds like a good idea i will try to do that now
Here you have a edited version with some blure + got the details on the grill lighter+I did my best with the headlights so we can see more details inside it hope you liek it :)
Looking better - Keep pushing it :)
Use a sharp IES spot light with a weak strength and adjust it's radius (fall-off) to get the tyres to play a little
Martin
Quote from: TpwUK on January 18, 2016, 02:40:50 PM
Looking better - Keep pushing it :)
Use a sharp IES spot light with a weak strength and adjust it's radius (fall-off) to get the tyres to play a little
Martin
So i added more light on the tires as you see + i removed the blure around the tires so it looks better
Yeah it's singing in harmony now ... One last tiny critique that might just be personal taste here, lower the bump strength and the scale on that carbon fibre. The scale doesn't need dropping by much though so adjust it in gently :)
You will have a very nice portfolio piece once you're done Seb :D
QuoteYeah it's singing in harmony now
+1. But I personally feel that the backplate is just a tad too blurred, as you really can't shoot at that deep a DofF. Focus on the trees nearest the front of the car, and be really gentle with depth as you recede.
Also, I'm not too keen on the license plate, especially the number. The ABC123 is just odd. Maybe you can swap the number for something generic? It would be an easy fix also in Photoshop, as it's straight on.
It's a wonderful image!
Bill G
okey i hope this will do i did everything you guys said but not the carbon scale down that part i skiped :D
Yep, there you go. You brought out that detail just right for the dark lighting you're using.
Agreed with Josh - Portfolio piece :)
Martin
Quote from: TpwUK on January 19, 2016, 02:19:45 PM
Agreed with Josh - Portfolio piece :)
Martin
great to hear :D