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Gallery => Amazing Shots => Topic started by: jitender.chaurasia on May 02, 2016, 02:01:44 AM

Title: Pen
Post by: jitender.chaurasia on May 02, 2016, 02:01:44 AM
Rendered in KS6
Title: Re: Pen
Post by: guest86567 on June 06, 2016, 09:32:05 AM
Simple and to the point. I would be excited to see a different texture on the ground! A wooden desk texture would look great! Great render!
Title: Re: Pen
Post by: NM-92 on June 06, 2016, 09:39:36 AM
These are good ! A couple of things i would change:

- Grip should be more like rubber, less shiny.
- It would be nice that the ink cartridges show the colour of the ink.
- Light source is producing a burned out area in the upper half of the pen. I'd reduce that a bit.

Also agree with joe. A wooden desk may be nice. Hope you don't mind the critiques. Cheers !