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I've fun with handcuffs find in Grabcad...

OK Officer, I confess... it's a really good render ;)

Quote from: Despot on August 04, 2016, 02:47:13 AM
OK Officer, I confess... it's a really good render ;)

Ahahahah  ;D
thanks  ;)

Quote from: Finema on August 04, 2016, 02:31:40 AM
I've fun with handcuffs find in Grabcad...

Great work finema! Also +1 for that newspaper, looking sweeet!

Thanks Hossein  ;)

here an other closer vue...

Indeed nice work!

Good one John! Haha!

Thanks Josh  ;)

That close up is really good !

These are great, Finema! You've gotten quite masterful with those worn metals :)

Eric

Thanks Nico & Eric  ;)

The close up looks sweet! Is the light reflection part of the hdri or an actual light?

Quote from: nicordf on August 05, 2016, 12:53:56 AM
The close up looks sweet! Is the light reflection part of the hdri or an actual light?

Thanks nicordf  ;)
I use a HRDI with 2 pin

Inspiring.

Very cool.

Thanks TyRuben  ;)

After the investigation, the officer takes a pause...

That cigarrette is looking great ! Sometimes is really fun to recycle some scenes.

Quote from: NM-92 on October 27, 2016, 06:00:01 AM
That cigarrette is looking great ! Sometimes is really fun to recycle some scenes.

yes  ;)
thanks nico

Very cool! Next step, get that paper to look less flat! Can you try modeling it?

A displacement map should do the trick

Quote from: Will Gibbons on October 27, 2016, 08:22:40 AM
Very cool! Next step, get that paper to look less flat! Can you try modeling it?

Sure  ;) you're right

Quote from: NM-92 on October 27, 2016, 08:33:59 AM
A displacement map should do the trick

yes sure  ;)

that cigarette is amazing man! also love the edges of that lighter,that's really a professional work!  ;)

Quote from: Hossein Alfideh on October 27, 2016, 10:00:07 AM
that cigarette is amazing man! also love the edges of that lighter,that's really a professional work!  ;)

Woua ! Thanks a lot  ;)

I added some pleats on the newspaper.

Looking real nice! Unless the officer suffers from OCD, I would rotate the cigarette a little, so it isn't perfectly aligned with the writing in the newspaper.  :D

looks way better now,I have to say that label you used on the glass and newspaper pleats were really necessary , help the scene look even better than before!
I disagree with chad about the cigarette being aligned with the lines , the way it stands is not impossible!  :)

Quote from: Chad Holton on October 27, 2016, 10:21:54 AM
Looking real nice! Unless the officer suffers from OCD, I would rotate the cigarette a little, so it isn't perfectly aligned with the writing in the newspaper.  :D

Thanks Chad  ;)
+ 1 for the OCD
It is late to the officer and he needs help to read. So he uses the cigarette to follow the lines. ;D

Quote from: Hossein Alfideh on October 27, 2016, 12:28:46 PM
looks way better now,I have to say that label you used on the glass and newspaper pleats were really necessary , help the scene look even better than before!
I disagree with chad about the cigarette being aligned with the lines , the way it stands is not impossible!  :)

Thanks Hossein

last improvement :
newpaper rotated
one cigarette added
fingerprint on glass

+1 on the PD label. Great changes.

Thanks a lot Nico  ;)

A couple of things...

The newspaper is too shiny still, as I can see a bit of reflection on the bottom left. You'll never see a reflection on a newspaper because it's so soft and textured. I'd suggest more of a diffuse material perhaps, or texturing it some more. It looks a bit flat too. Have you tried using a large procedural noise texture with a very tiny bump value? Lastly, I think the bokeh/DOF is a bit strong. To get that much, the background would need to be quite far away.

Really nice progression on this so far!

thanks for your help Will
Here are the enhanced image