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Gallery => Amazing Shots => Topic started by: jitender.chaurasia on March 29, 2017, 08:01:49 PM

Title: Violin in Dark
Post by: jitender.chaurasia on March 29, 2017, 08:01:49 PM
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Post by: chinustud on March 29, 2017, 08:45:35 PM
Great work Jitender. Keep it up.
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Post by: diegoev on March 30, 2017, 01:07:32 PM
Nice!
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Post by: Bernardo Lickfold on March 30, 2017, 04:07:58 PM
i really like the last one!!
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Post by: alialbdri on March 31, 2017, 05:26:26 AM
It look good,
The last image has mood which makes it stand out
maybe add some environment dust like the one in the air
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Post by: jitender.chaurasia on March 31, 2017, 08:26:06 AM
Thank you all for comments
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Post by: Speedster on March 31, 2017, 09:49:52 AM
Looking really nice!

Some suggestions-

Violins are always highly polished and smooth, unless they are old and uncared for.  Try for a smoother wood and a softly polished finish.

You need to remap the edge of the bridge so you can orient the grain 90 degrees.  Now, it is cross (edge) grain, which is incorrect and would instantly split from the string tension.  The bridge is a hardwood, and lighter in color.

I think you can hide the bow, as it's somewhat distracting.

Personally, I really like the mood of the first image!  Keep pushing it, as it's a great model to work with!

Bill G
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