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Gallery => Amazing Shots => Topic started by: scottfranksdesigns on March 20, 2012, 01:26:51 PM

Title: Wall E Drafting/Highlighters
Post by: scottfranksdesigns on March 20, 2012, 01:26:51 PM
Hello all;

This was rendered in keyshot as a promotional piece for my website.

Was really fun to do  ;D

Feedback always appreciated

Thankyou

Scott

Title: Re: Wall E Drafting/Highlighters
Post by: feher on March 21, 2012, 03:34:13 AM
Very cool.
I feel the white paper is too white, everything blends into each other becasue of it. I have a hard time seperating the cards from the paper. Also since you're doing close up having some texture on the paper and cards would help.
Also something to think about is what do you want us to focus on in these images ? I would force our eye to those areas. For me right now I'm looking all over the place I didn't notice your personal info the first time I looked at these.
Keep up the hard work.
Thanks for sharing.
Tim
Title: Re: Wall E Drafting/Highlighters
Post by: PhilippeV8 on March 21, 2012, 07:51:53 AM
Also it would be nice if you could give the felt tips of the markers a different texture/bumpmap so they don't look so glossy as the markers themselves.
Title: Re: Wall E Drafting/Highlighters
Post by: scottfranksdesigns on March 22, 2012, 03:22:41 AM
Thankyou for your comments really appreciate it

I didn't consider that the paper is too white!

I will look into this.

Cheers

Scott
Title: Re: Wall E Drafting/Highlighters
Post by: bobr2000 on March 22, 2012, 03:44:41 AM
May be worth to make a couple of little defect (scratch or smtng like that) on Highlighters?