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Gallery => Amazing Shots => Topic started by: ahmet yılmaz on February 17, 2013, 12:56:59 PM

Title: astonmartin one77
Post by: ahmet yılmaz on February 17, 2013, 12:56:59 PM
This is mine new personal work.Hope you like it ;)
I used for modeling 3d max,rendering keyshot.
Final photoshop retouch version...
(http://c1302.hizliresim.com/16/k/k77bq.jpg)
Firstly keyshot render..
(http://c1302.hizliresim.com/16/k/k779s.jpg)
Photoshop phases...
(http://b1302.hizliresim.com/16/k/k76uk.jpg)
Title: Re: astonmartin one77
Post by: EGON on February 17, 2013, 06:16:26 PM
Nice work. But needs work on the windows.
Title: Re: astonmartin one77
Post by: ahmet yılmaz on February 18, 2013, 03:51:45 AM
Thanks  :)
You're right, window reflection could have been better than...
Title: Re: astonmartin one77
Post by: schneich on February 18, 2013, 05:56:19 AM

depth of field looks unrealistic, too much vignetting, you loose a lot of detail in the shadows....

nice modelling though....



cheers

t.
Title: Re: astonmartin one77
Post by: tsunami on February 18, 2013, 09:18:33 AM
The car is nice, but i think is not matching with backplate, because car seems too much small than around objects.
That's maybe because it's has a semi tilt effect, that make car as a toy car..
regards
Title: Re: astonmartin one77
Post by: ahmet yılmaz on February 18, 2013, 12:29:14 PM
tsunami did not escape the eyes of your  :)
Right! But otherwise car would not have been nicely aligned into the render frame?

schneich
"you loose a lot of detail in the shadows..." Compared to the first render.Which details lost???

Thanks for helpfull critical comments  ;)
Title: Re: astonmartin one77
Post by: schneich on February 18, 2013, 02:04:38 PM
in the shadows...
Title: Re: astonmartin one77
Post by: tsunami on February 18, 2013, 02:21:21 PM
Quote from: ahmet yılmaz on February 18, 2013, 12:29:14 PM
tsunami did not escape the eyes of your  :)
Right! But otherwise car would not have been nicely aligned into the render frame?

schneich
"you loose a lot of detail in the shadows..." Compared to the first render.Which details lost???

Thanks for helpfull critical comments  ;)
Ahmet dont' get mad at critical comments, because them are made to improve work... ;)..and u should be happy, because sometime many posts here don't get any comments...also if are nice works ;)..and your work got them...soooo...
I always like image with high contrast, if u take a look on some of my work you will see it...so i like your..but i would try to change something as i told u before..; and maybe i should try also to change hdri environment, and light setup..and try to give some tires weight,..cutting them a bit with a plane..
Regards
Title: Re: astonmartin one77
Post by: ahmet yılmaz on February 18, 2013, 03:49:09 PM
schneich you're right but that is little detail lose... İ think more realistically than first render :)

Thanks tsunami...
but misunderstood me i'm already happy for comments :)
i said in my comments why i had made that... that's all ;)
Title: Re: astonmartin one77
Post by: Josh3D on February 19, 2013, 07:22:08 AM
I love this car and the direction you're going with the scene. I would definitely bookmark this post from Tim Feher (http://keyshot.com/forum/index.php/topic,5318.0.html) though, everyone should :)