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Gallery => Amazing Shots => Topic started by: Alang7™ on August 15, 2015, 05:59:29 AM

Title: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Alang7™ on August 15, 2015, 05:59:29 AM
Something new ... :)

(https://farm6.staticflickr.com/5774/19971442744_145566b316_c.jpg)

High Quality: https://www.flickr.com/photos/alang7/19971442744/

Opinions ?
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: TpwUK on August 15, 2015, 06:19:29 AM
Great looking model, not sure what's happening with the reflection though on that left door glass. I am thinking it's just an angle thing, but whatever it is, it's causing me a distraction and is forcing my eyes to keep focusing on that.

Martin
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Alang7™ on August 15, 2015, 10:58:39 AM
Thank you Martin.  :)

Yes, you're right ... the problem is caused by ENV i think. Anyway, you think that i wrong the reflection values on the glass ?  :)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Speedster on August 15, 2015, 11:52:28 AM
Neat!  Just a slight tweak of the HDR (maybe height?) would pop the windshield.  Or try adding a pin (vertical rectangular, perhaps on an angle) to throw a reflection over the surface.  You may want to play more with the white paint.  white is the most difficult, and Tim Feher has shown a number of tips when dealing with white.  To me it has a slight yellow cast that does not work with the stark environment and backplate.

Keep pushing it!  But not to far!

Bill G
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Alang7™ on August 15, 2015, 11:55:57 AM
Uhmmhm, i don't know, really. I can give it a try, but for me it's not so easy :)

Thanks for your tips :)

Anyway, another rendering coming soon. Maybe tomorrow, so stay tuned :)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Despot on August 15, 2015, 01:17:14 PM
I like your renderings, but for me, on this one, the car colour doesn't fit the backplate somehow, perhaps try a blue ?

J
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: slater on August 15, 2015, 02:46:44 PM
Backplate It is predominantly white color, and car is also White , so eyes focus is confusing, i will try a brilliant red, and if i can suggest, for me car Alignment doesn't fit with backplate Flooring, i will try to adjust , and showing only 3 car wheels.
regards
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Despot on August 16, 2015, 12:59:04 AM
Quote from: slater on August 15, 2015, 02:46:44 PM
Backplate It is predominantly white color, and car is also White , so eyes focus is confusing, i will try a brilliant red, and if i can suggest, for me car Alignment doesn't fit with backplate Flooring, i will try to adjust , and showing only 3 car wheels.
regards

Hey Slater, do you know the meaning of the words 'original thought' ?  :)  :)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: slater on August 16, 2015, 02:34:28 AM
Quote from: The Metal Master on August 16, 2015, 12:59:04 AM
Quote from: slater on August 15, 2015, 02:46:44 PM
Backplate It is predominantly white color, and car is also White , so eyes focus is confusing, i will try a brilliant red, and if i can suggest, for me car Alignment doesn't fit with backplate Flooring, i will try to adjust , and showing only 3 car wheels.
regards

Hey Slater, do you know the meaning of the words 'original thought' ?  :)  :)
Maybe not..please could you explain me?
Thx
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Despot on August 16, 2015, 11:42:13 PM
I was saying that your comment was essentially an amalgam of what myself and TpwUK had said previously.... that's all  :)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: PhilippeV8 on August 17, 2015, 01:21:44 AM
Perspective is indeed way off .. look at the floor tiles ...
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Robb63 on August 17, 2015, 06:08:58 AM
I think the door glass fell off the holders! It happened to me all the time in my 70's cars  :)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Alang7™ on August 17, 2015, 11:14:19 AM
Okay guys, thanks alot for your tips :)

Another render coming soon ... maybe tonight :)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Alang7™ on August 17, 2015, 02:27:52 PM
Finally the rendering is here! :)

(https://farm1.staticflickr.com/724/20672211601_8db608a8ca_c.jpg)

High Quality: https://www.flickr.com/photos/alang7/20672211601/

Opinions ? :)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: HLeandre on August 17, 2015, 03:32:45 PM
Really great work!
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Alang7™ on August 17, 2015, 03:39:13 PM
Thank you :)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: TpwUK on August 17, 2015, 04:26:22 PM
This is much better Alan - Just watch that over-burn at the backend of the car, the spoiler and the rear pillar are almost getting blown out and merging into the cloud too. Other than that it's looking great.

Martin
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Alang7™ on August 17, 2015, 04:27:28 PM
Thanks Martin :)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: PhilippeV8 on August 18, 2015, 12:59:34 AM
I like this way better (y)
Title: Re: Pontiac Firebird Trans Am
Post by: Alang7™ on August 18, 2015, 10:04:30 AM
Thank you mate :)