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Started by Hossein Alfideh, April 23, 2016, 12:16:59 PM

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Hossein Alfideh

Hello guys
This is one hour work hope you like it  ;)

Hossein Alfideh

Quote from: Hossein Alfideh on April 23, 2016, 12:16:59 PM
Hello guys
This is one hour work hope you like it  ;)
this is the raw one

Will Gibbons

Cool. I personally like the raw render better, but one thing that might really help is making sure it looks grounded. This image makes your vehicle lok like it's balanced on the kickstand and not quite on the ground. You may wish to make sure your geometry isn't floating. Also, shadows will really help with this and depending on your light source, your shadows may be getting washed out.

I'd like to see another pass at this one. Cool graffiti wall.

Hossein Alfideh

Quote from: willgibbonsdesign on April 25, 2016, 07:04:39 AM
Cool. I personally like the raw render better, but one thing that might really help is making sure it looks grounded. This image makes your vehicle lok like it's balanced on the kickstand and not quite on the ground. You may wish to make sure your geometry isn't floating. Also, shadows will really help with this and depending on your light source, your shadows may be getting washed out.

I'd like to see another pass at this one. Cool graffiti wall.
Thanks will for your advice I really appreciate it ...
this is as far as I get , let me know what you think man  :)

Will Gibbons

There you go! Now it makes more sense, visually.