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Started by Mohammed MOUYH, August 08, 2016, 11:05:33 AM

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Mohammed MOUYH


NM-92

Hi ! A few things to point out:

- Your perforated texture on the white leather has it's mapping wrong. That's why it intersects with itself.
- The bump texture on the floor seems a bit strong. Decreasing it would give a more realistic look. The one on the wall seems to be scaled a tad too big, but that could depend on what style of wall you are after, so it's just personal preference.
- Populating that book shelf with some book can improve this a lot, it feels weird being empty.

I like the overall lighting a lot, but beware of completely losing things to a 100% black. A fill light can help with that. That's all i can help you with, hope you don't mind the critiques.

o9p

On a very small note, I think the front bike tire is intersecting below the plane of the floor.  :P

Mohammed MOUYH

thanks for every thing 

nicordf

Hey Mohammed! The overall lighting looks great, but interior-wise, it looks that everything is happening at the right side and you have a wide, unused space at the left.

It is a really good start for sure!!

Mohammed MOUYH


Despot

This is much better, although I agree with the comments of both Nicolas's :)

And yes, the front wheel of the bike seems to be sunken into the wooden floor

Mohammed MOUYH

yes i agree whit you
the front wheel of the bike seems to be sunken into the wooden floor
but it doesn't matter hh
thnx brooo