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Started by satish gobind, March 30, 2017, 03:06:19 PM

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satish gobind

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Will Gibbons

I think the 2nd one from the top is the best one out of the lot. I would recommend you take that one and push it further. Find photo reference of every single material shown in that room and try to improve them. It could be a very impressive image!

satish gobind

thankyou will ! for your feed back

Hossein Alfideh

Hmm... That's one nice interior design you got going on there!I agree with Will the second one is the best one,the only thing I think you should work on a bit more are those flowers of course!
other than that I suggest trying to use volumetric mist ( you can find the thread with the same name by Eric Brock).I've used this a lot since he shared his studies and I'm sure you would get awesome results.

satish gobind

thank you Hossein Alfideh will surely give it a try !

nicordf


It's a good start you're having here Satish! I would work a bit more on the ambience and materials - as Will said- to push them a bit further. Have a look on Boyd's renderings! they are a really good source of inspiration  ;)

theAVator

Awesome start!

the one thing that sticks out to me is in the bedroom scene. The wood floor is off somehow... idk if the perspective is throwing it off, or something else. The wood to the left side of the bed looks pretty normal - the boards appear to be intersecting at 90 degree angles. But then the section near the desk and chair is so askew, like its hitting at a different angle or was squished to fit or something. It just doesn't seem to be the same floor all the way across the room.

mattjgerard

I was thinking the same thing as theAVator, and i usually get these odd looks when using wider cameras than 50mm. Right now I am trying to frame all my scenes using 50-80mm lenses, seems to minimize the odd perspective looks. Also, the chair by the desk needs some small shadow spots where the legs hit the floor, just something to show they are touching.