With sterling silver Chrom Carbon pens

[prismatic]

Hi
my new attempts

Michael

[Speedster]

Nice reflections, especially on the first image!  What HDR did you use?  Also, you have really nailed the carbon fiber texture- nice depth and surface!
Bill G

[EGON]

The first one looks too flat the rest to much contrast. Starting to get that cartoon look. JMHO.

[feher]

I like the first one the best. I agree with EGON on looking a tad flat. I think if you can get a secondary highlight on the pens that will add alot more shape and depth.
The others are way blown out.
Thanks for sharing.
Would love to see these done again.
Tim

[prismatic]

Hi
new attempt

Michael

[EGON]

Quality takes time. Happy holidays Michael.