McLaren P1 working hard to improve.

Started by Shubham_Kapoor, July 22, 2015, 06:31:13 AM

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Shubham_Kapoor

Hello again!
I am trying to improve myself more and more, rendering every single day. The one's I think are somewhat nice I post them.
I do a lot of mistakes in my renders but hey mistakes teach us. So here's McLaren P1 rocking some Vorsteiner VSM-313.

HDR made in Photoshop CC
Post Pro in Photoshop and Lightroom.

The model has some serious geometry issues. Lighting may not be perfect or even good. So suggestions are welcomed.

Josh3D

It's a great shot, but yeah, that geometry is all kinds of tessellated.

Angelo


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Shubham_Kapoor

Quote from: Josh Mings on July 22, 2015, 07:51:16 AM
It's a great shot, but yeah, that geometry is all kinds of tessellated.
I will make sure that next time I use a well modeled geometry.
Happy Birthday  though, You know time zones and stuff  ;)

feher

I'm only looking at the lighting and the shapes you are pulling out of you vehicle.
Some really nice work ! The wheels have some depth to them rotor is not trying to grab attention over the wheel. Nice !
Tires need some love.
But as a whole this has a nice mood. Keep up the great work.
Tim

Shubham_Kapoor

Quote from: feher on July 22, 2015, 06:37:40 PM
I'm only looking at the lighting and the shapes you are pulling out of you vehicle.
Some really nice work ! The wheels have some depth to them rotor is not trying to grab attention over the wheel. Nice !
Tires need some love.
But as a whole this has a nice mood. Keep up the great work.
Tim
Surely sir I will try to improve more and more. Love to hear from you. Some constructive criticism is all a student needs.