Bonnie was in studio today..

Started by Finema, June 03, 2016, 09:31:06 AM

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Finema

My Bonneville was  in keyshot studio today... :)

TpwUK

Beautiful modelling, needs better grounding with the tyres, they look over inflated when not clipped by the ground plane. If the model comes with a main or side stand use it, and you'll be onto a winner with this one. You have lots of scope here, push it to the boundaries and back again :P

Martin

Finema


Finema

an other view

Finema

Hi Martin
I think this one is better clipped to background
In fact, I'm searching compromise between illustration and photo.
I try to use light in order to have render into photo and illustration
sorry for my english :)

Will Gibbons

I agree that it could really use a stand of sort so it doesn't appear to be self-balancing. The warm light is a nice touch. Have you tried adding some grime to it with textures, or any other sort of wear?

TpwUK

No problem regarding English :)

Have you set the ground pane to clip the geometry ? It doesn't look right as it is, the tyres look as if they have melted or something strange. It could be just the material used on the ground pane and the reflections, but it looks odd.

Martin

Finema

Hi,
Yes i have set the ground pane to clip the geometry. I've also added grime on the floor, change environment, add light in the headlight, etc...
There are littles points of light on background.

TpwUK

That looks better now with how it's sitting on the ground plane, don't loose heart with this one. Bikes are a more tricky subject, or at least for me they are, they have a lot of exposed details that need to be well lit, some strong light some gentle more diffused and it's tricky to get a good balance. You might do better with some good old fashioned clay renders and get your lighting  and camera views set up how you like, then add materials and tweak textures and materials as you go along.

Martin

Finema

Thanks Martin  ;)
What about the little point of light on my render ?

Finema

#10
I think this render is better than the others.
But if i add light in the headlight, a ton of particles of light appear....

Finema

Here the same with light in headlight but with a lot of artefact. I dunno why ?

TpwUK


Finema

thank you for the consultings martin  ;)

Finema

#14
a little effect in photoshop