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Started by Finema, August 04, 2016, 02:31:40 AM

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NM-92

+1 on the PD label. Great changes.

Finema


Will Gibbons

A couple of things...

The newspaper is too shiny still, as I can see a bit of reflection on the bottom left. You'll never see a reflection on a newspaper because it's so soft and textured. I'd suggest more of a diffuse material perhaps, or texturing it some more. It looks a bit flat too. Have you tried using a large procedural noise texture with a very tiny bump value? Lastly, I think the bokeh/DOF is a bit strong. To get that much, the background would need to be quite far away.

Really nice progression on this so far!

Finema

thanks for your help Will
Here are the enhanced image