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Started by PhilippeV8, November 04, 2011, 01:30:45 AM

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PhilippeV8

A fire-resistant ventilation grill mounted in a metal stud gypsum wall ...

PhilippeV8

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The same, mounted in a fire-door.

guest84672

Great! The would under the frames looks a bit flat - did you use a bump map?

PhilippeV8

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I did .. but it doesn't show much indeed, now that you mention it.

I did notice however that I got a wrong type hinge on my door ;)  If you would mount this in real this way, your door would just fall down to the floor and basicaly be unmountable.

guest84672

I can see that now ;-) - easy to fix in CAD!

The bump shows better in the first image. Still, awesome work.

feher

Nice work Philippe,
I was gonna mention on your first image to make the room on the right darker that way it would push out your door more. But, I see you did just that on the second image. Makes a Big difference. Also on the first image the DOF is not doing anything for your image I feel. It might be it's too strong. In the second image my focus goes right to the door. I guess what I'm trying to say is that everything I was gonna suggest you did already in the second image...lol Nice work. I think I would still work some gradients on the back walls to push attention more on the door.
Great work !
Thanks for sharing.
Tim

Speedster

Only thing I miss is a baseboard!
Bill G

PhilippeV8

this bettah ?

I thought for the door-version to go without a baseboard for a cleaner & more contemporate look ... but it does show kinda "showroomy".  If I got time, I'll add baseboards.

Thnx yall for the feedback !