12 - Modified VW Golf Cabriolet Mk 1

[shadowychild]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xDtMBAyKHA

[Josh3D]

I'm going to be blunt with you 

Kill the intro's and concentrate on capturing the detail of the cars with the materials, lighting and in the motion. Those wide shots flying in are to far out. If anything start close and catch the curves of the car as light moves over it, as you fly out. Keep at it.