:onew attempt , I try to do my best.
any comment is welcome.
Thanks
The first one is really stunning! Nice for commercial.
Good job.
it looks a bit grainy ... other than that .. great work !
Bump up the render time on that and you're good to go.
Why does the Canon logo say 'printer and scanner' under it? :)
Are ground shadows turned on?
Quote from: joshmings on November 21, 2011, 03:11:06 PM
Bump up the render time on that and you're good to go.
Why does the Canon logo say 'printer and scanner' under it? :)
Are ground shadows turned on?
Ha ha, thanks for reminding
Wow! :o
Great rendering. Have Canon got a new series of "Conan" lenses? ;)
I still feel the contrast is quite high ... no ? Maybe increase gamma ?
It was better in your previous render, but even there still too much contrast. On this last render you can't see where the left-top of the camera stops and where the background starts for instance.
Quote from: PhilippeV8 on November 22, 2011, 06:34:08 AM
I still feel the contrast is quite high ... no ? Maybe increase gamma ?
It was better in your previous render, but even there still too much contrast. On this last render you can't see where the left-top of the camera stops and where the background starts for instance.
My English is not good, thanks your instruction
The detail and surface texture looks really nice! I like it!
-- Henrik
Here's a quick photoshop edit to show the difference. Some parts in your render are totaly flat black .. try to adjust gamma & brightness to show detail, even in those dark areas.
Your first render of your latest post is just awesome ! So you CAN do it ! YES YOU CAN :D
The second one is also OK.
For the 3rd one, check my photoshop edit.
Just a suggestion though ;)
PS: another idea: add a KeyShot render or a picture to the display of your camera on that first render ... might be cool ;)
The lens still has the conan typo, both on the front and the side. Other than that love it.
I particularly like the surface coating effect of the lens, I would try changing the bloom effect also to give a softer image. Good job!
You have come along way from that first image. Nice work. I too feel the image looks hard. Softer look and feel will do wonders for this.
Thanks for sharing.
You have a keeper for sure.
Tim
Much better. The hot shoe looks really thin .
nice work... ;)