Canon SLR digital camera

ada · November 20, 2011, 11:11:15 PM

:onew attempt , I try to do my best.
any comment is welcome.
Thanks

guest2984 · November 20, 2011, 11:53:26 PM

The first one is really stunning! Nice for commercial.

Good job.

PhilippeV8 · November 21, 2011, 01:25:38 AM

it looks a bit grainy ... other than that .. great work !

Josh3D · November 21, 2011, 03:11:06 PM

Bump up the render time on that and you're good to go.

Why does the Canon logo say 'printer and scanner' under it?

Are ground shadows turned on?

ada · November 21, 2011, 05:05:08 PM

Quote from: joshmings on November 21, 2011, 03:11:06 PM
Bump up the render time on that and you're good to go.

Why does the Canon logo say 'printer and scanner' under it?

Are ground shadows turned on?

Ha ha, thanks for reminding

Chad Holton · November 21, 2011, 06:24:03 PM

Wow!

caden2010 · November 22, 2011, 05:46:56 AM

Great rendering. Have Canon got a new series of "Conan" lenses?

PhilippeV8 · November 22, 2011, 06:34:08 AM

I still feel the contrast is quite high ... no ? Maybe increase gamma ?
It was better in your previous render, but even there still too much contrast. On this last render you can't see where the left-top of the camera stops and where the background starts for instance.

ada · November 22, 2011, 05:32:56 PM

Quote from: PhilippeV8 on November 22, 2011, 06:34:08 AM
I still feel the contrast is quite high ... no ? Maybe increase gamma ?
It was better in your previous render, but even there still too much contrast. On this last render you can't see where the left-top of the camera stops and where the background starts for instance.

My English is not good, thanks your instruction

KeyShot · November 22, 2011, 08:55:05 PM

The detail and surface texture looks really nice! I like it!

-- Henrik

PhilippeV8 · November 22, 2011, 11:19:55 PM

Here's a quick photoshop edit to show the difference. Some parts in your render are totaly flat black .. try to adjust gamma & brightness to show detail, even in those dark areas.

Your first render of your latest post is just awesome ! So you CAN do it ! YES YOU CAN

The second one is also OK.
For the 3rd one, check my photoshop edit.

Just a suggestion though

PS: another idea: add a KeyShot render or a picture to the display of your camera on that first render ... might be cool

youknowwho4eva · November 23, 2011, 09:45:29 AM

The lens still has the conan typo, both on the front and the side. Other than that love it.

Cliff Stanton · November 23, 2011, 11:33:43 PM

I particularly like the surface coating effect of the lens, I would try changing the bloom effect also to give a softer image. Good job!

feher · November 25, 2011, 06:27:18 AM

You have come along way from that first image. Nice work. I too feel the image looks hard. Softer look and feel will do wonders for this.
Thanks for sharing.
You have a keeper for sure.
Tim

EGON · November 25, 2011, 03:54:16 PM

Much better. The hot shoe looks really thin .

Canon SLR digital camera

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