German Motorbike 1914

Josh3D · March 30, 2015, 06:20:16 AM

Pretty cool. Still think a angle from the front, like slide01_03, would be a good one for this.

HLeandre · March 30, 2015, 10:29:45 PM

Really nice work.

Esben Oxholm · March 30, 2015, 10:58:37 PM

It's an improvement for sure, but I feel it can get even better.
I agree with Josh that an angle showing the front, would be better.

Also, you have some tangents going on. (Thanks to Tim for the name and some great tips about the phenomena. https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.407082086138495.1073741836.394218607424843&type=1)
I have painted them in with a green line. It can imagine that it's practically impossible to avoid with all those details, but give it a try

The lighting looks good, though the back of the bike still feels a bit flat (white circle).

Last comment

I'm not a fan of the texture on the ground floor. Could be cool with some cracked concrete or something... but I think we're going into taste now.

Great job!

JerryG · April 21, 2015, 10:09:33 PM

thanks again!

i have try my best

and this are the last 2 render i will share with you ( its time to render other projects

)

(no post work)

best jerry

Arian Shamil · April 21, 2015, 10:19:35 PM

This is an amazing work! Love the model, love the render! A+++

JerryG · April 21, 2015, 11:31:25 PM

thanks

TpwUK · April 22, 2015, 04:36:42 AM

Dont shelve this project JerryG, by all means move on to other things, then come back to this. It's been a pleasure seeing this and the effort you have put into it. I look forward to seeing more of your work

Martin

mgvie · April 22, 2015, 11:02:46 AM

...Hi, amazing work,wow!... my favorite ...Picture 1 and (a drip oil here and there,...my Idea

)

mgvie