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Renault Range T480

Started by Alang7™, July 16, 2015, 07:10:17 PM

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Alang7™

Today i got a new model  :D





High Quality #1: https://www.flickr.com/photos/alang7/19138551384/

High Quality #2: https://www.flickr.com/photos/alang7/19735004756/


The 2st render nothing special, i just played with saturation, and other values.

Opinions ? :)

Magnus Skogsfjord

Hot damn you're having a steep learning curve, aren't you? Really great leap from your initial image to this beauty.

Now, I'm not much of an automotive renderer, so I won't know exactly what to look for, but I think this looks excellent!

That said, I would maybe like to see some more space the top at this image. Maybe also some global illumination or a very subtle spec effect on the ground plane? Might be some more competent automotive renders here who has a better eye on this :)

Alang7™

Ohh, thank you :)

I'm learning day by day ...

I didn't understand what you said about the global illumination .. :)

Esben Oxholm

Hi Alang.

You are getting really good at rendering trucks!
As Magnus suggests, I think you should put a bit more focus on the composition of the image it self.
Also, I feel that you by a little post production can enhance your renderings even further... Forget about them purists ;)

I did a quick photoshop editing to show what I mean. I hope it's okay? Just ask if you have any questions about it. I can send you the .psd if you're interested. The amount of post is of course a matter of taste.


Alang7™

Ohh, yes, an effect like this! I will try it with another rendering :D

Thanks for the tip :)

Alang7™

Another rendering with this Range T480 :)



High Quality: https://www.flickr.com/photos/alang7/19730698388/

Opinions ? :)

Josh3D

Love the color and feel. Little tight against that right edge though. Man these look good!

Alang7™

#7
Back with the Renault Range T! :)

A special thanks to Vorsteiner for the backplate.

Anyway, yes, a little problem with shadow ... i didn't saw when i did rendering  :-\



High Quality: https://www.flickr.com/photos/alang7/21716748922/

Opinions ? :)

Arian Shamil

Very very nice work!  8)
I love your truck renders :)

Will Gibbons

Yeah, as the others said, these are looking great! My suggestions have more to do with composition and narrative like Esben mentioned. Ask yourself where you want the viewer's eye to go and then try to make a 1st, 2nd and 3rd read, meaning the thing you notice first, then next, then last. This will add interest to the overall image. The reflections across each surface look great. Maybe make the tires look a bit more worn/textured/dusty?

Great work!

Alang7™

Thanks to all :)

@Will: About the tyres effect, is a great idea, but i have to look how do the texturing