Audi RS6 2015

Shubham_Kapoor · September 18, 2015, 06:05:57 AM

Hey, So here's a new one Audi RS6 2015.
Getting myself ready for a portfolio and for Humster 3d Challenge very excited.

Hdri generated by sun&sky in Keyshot.
Any questions for this, I am More than glad to answer.

Criticisms are super welcome.

TpwUK · September 18, 2015, 06:29:47 AM

This looks pretty good Shubham, the critique i have is that the sun spot on the bonnet looks too small to me, but i could be wrong

Martin

Shubham_Kapoor · September 18, 2015, 06:32:10 AM

Quote from: TpwUK on September 18, 2015, 06:29:47 AM
This looks pretty good Shubham, the critique i have is that the sun spot on the bonnet looks too small to me, but i could be wrong

Martin

It's not a sun spot, It was a shiny part on the sheet metal so I created a little flare on it

Josh3D · September 18, 2015, 09:48:54 AM

Your composition has improved so much. This looks great Shubham.

Shubham_Kapoor · September 18, 2015, 09:54:09 AM

Quote from: Josh Mings on September 18, 2015, 09:48:54 AM
Your composition has improved so much. This looks great Shubham.

Thank You very much Josh. Also Thank You for the last featured post on facebook and other social media, that was my dream come true.

Will Gibbons · September 21, 2015, 07:33:46 AM

Yeah, great work!

My feedback:

I'd touch up the road paint (white line) in the shadowed area. Looks a bit artifact-y... I'd just match the motion blur look you've achieved outside the shadow. Also, Maybe a bit more of a contrasting/interesting highlights/reflections on the hood? I know your rendering is probably really accurate as there's not much to reflect in the sky... just thinking of ways to make it a bit more dynamic.

Great work!

Shubham_Kapoor · September 21, 2015, 08:52:27 AM

Quote from: willgibbonsdesign on September 21, 2015, 07:33:46 AM
Yeah, great work!

My feedback:

I'd touch up the road paint (white line) in the shadowed area. Looks a bit artifact-y... I'd just match the motion blur look you've achieved outside the shadow. Also, Maybe a bit more of a contrasting/interesting highlights/reflections on the hood? I know your rendering is probably really accurate as there's not much to reflect in the sky... just thinking of ways to make it a bit more dynamic.

Great work!

That's my favourite type of criticism thanks a lot for that and true that sometimes renders should be more interesting than accurate

Arian Shamil · September 21, 2015, 02:04:17 PM

Nice!

Love the colors and comps too!

Shubham_Kapoor · September 21, 2015, 08:00:52 PM

Quote from: Arian Shamil on September 21, 2015, 02:04:17 PM
Nice!
Love the colors and comps too!

Thank you Arian! I will do more renders once my exams get finished.