Laraki Epitome II

[Mahmoud]

Thank you everybody for the critics and the advices i tried to improve my work here is the  new render i hope you like it
waiting for your feedback   
Check the full project here BEHANCE (all passess included) : https://www.behance.net/gallery/29711765/Laraki-Epitome

[TpwUK]

A much better angle than the first render you did with this model, the one thing that stands out a mile though, if the sand is soft enough to leave foot prints in then there should be tyre tracks too. Other than that you have done pretty well really

Martin

[Mahmoud]

A much better angle than the first render you did with this model, the one thing that stands out a mile though, if the sand is soft enough to leave foot prints in then there should be tyre tracks too. Other than that you have done pretty well really

Martin

Thanks to you and your advices i tried to add some  tyre tracks here but i think they look fake ( they need so much work" XD anyways thank you again, your advices are really helpful

[SergioBL]

Yeah! this image is a lot better! And don't stop there, please add the tire track

[Will Gibbons]

Nice so far!

I'd just ask why it's on sand. Nobody who'd own this car would drive it on sand... so I'd say find a backplate that makes sense and you'll be off to the races!

[Mahmoud]

Nice so far!

I'd just ask why it's on sand. Nobody who'd own this car would drive it on sand... so I'd say find a backplate that makes sense and you'll be off to the races!

I want some challenge  lol i will do another render with a good backplate !!! Thank you

[Will Gibbons]

It's all personal preference, so take my comments with a grain of salt. This isn't 'bad', I just ask because I think it's the first question a viewer might ask. keep working at it though!