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Started by zooropa, June 29, 2016, 11:04:51 AM

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zooropa

Hi. I am trying to print some renders that I did in order to make a portfolio.

I would like to ask you about the "composition" and "quality" that you percieve in this render.
Do you think is "professional" enough to show it ?

Thanks for your help. Open to recommendations.


NM-92

Hi ! This is a good render! The only thing that bugs me a little is that completely sharp edge where the key is resting. Everything in real life is filleted, at least a tiny bit. Also, why is the key "floating" ? Is this some kind of magnet holder ? Cheers !

Nicolas.

zooropa

Thanks Nicolas. Yes actually is a magnet handle. I got what you said. I will put the fillets.
Regards

Bruno

Will Gibbons

This is a matter of personal taste, but I'd try a stronger light source. Try using a different HDRI. In general, I think it's a bit too dark. Nice image otherwise.