Racist Commander

Hossein Alfideh · August 27, 2016, 01:13:51 PM

heyy all
this is my latest work!
I have to say I'm really not racist or following nazism or these kind of savage stuff,just though it would be cool to see if germans could have made a Call Of Duty WW2,what would the starting menu look like

hope you like it

Despot · August 28, 2016, 12:06:46 PM

I really like the middle render, but I can imagine for a lot of people this is difficult subject matter...

Hossein Alfideh · August 28, 2016, 12:55:16 PM

Quote from: Despot on August 28, 2016, 12:06:46 PM
I really like the middle render, but I can imagine for a lot of people this is difficult subject matter...

Thank you john!that's my favourite too.

I have to say I was a bit disappointed not getting any feed back on this, you're 100% right but I didnt intend to insult anybody or make a disturbing content here,maybe people got me wrong but the luger pistol is somthing used by the germans during ww2 and I think a simple map,a pistol,some small flags here really isnt showing anything racist!!
we have suffered war for 8 years too,believe me I know what a disaster it is and I'm against that as much as you guy are but let's not take everything personal

Thanks for your comment again john,really appreciate it

NM-92 · August 28, 2016, 06:53:30 PM

Hi Hossein. The textures on this scene are awesome, but i think it lacks a shadow below the pistol barrel. The middle render is also my favourite one.

HaroldL · August 28, 2016, 07:34:41 PM

Quote from: NM-92 on August 28, 2016, 06:53:30 PM
Hi Hossein. The textures on this scene are awesome, but i think it lacks a shadow below the pistol barrel. The middle render is also my favourite one.

Looking at the other shadows it appears that the light source is from a low angle to the ground plane and coming from the lower left of the scene. I see a faint shadow for the barrel just about half way between the barrel and the clip, which seems about right. A brighter light may enhance the shadows a bit, making them a bit harder.

Josh3D · August 29, 2016, 06:06:34 AM

Overall really good. I'd add a highlight to that grip and the lack of stronger shadow under the gun makes it seem to float a little.

Hossein Alfideh · August 29, 2016, 01:14:42 PM

Quote from: NM-92 on August 28, 2016, 06:53:30 PM
Hi Hossein. The textures on this scene are awesome, but i think it lacks a shadow below the pistol barrel. The middle render is also my favourite one.

thank you nico!

about the shadow and lighting harold is right!my whole idea was to create a private desk with a big window in the room so the shadows wont block the map and as the barrel doesnt have contact with the map the shadow got brighter

Quote from: HaroldL on August 28, 2016, 07:34:41 PM
Quote from: NM-92 on August 28, 2016, 06:53:30 PM
Hi Hossein. The textures on this scene are awesome, but i think it lacks a shadow below the pistol barrel. The middle render is also my favourite one.
Looking at the other shadows it appears that the light source is from a low angle to the ground plane and coming from the lower left of the scene. I see a faint shadow for the barrel just about half way between the barrel and the clip, which seems about right. A brighter light may enhance the shadows a bit, making them a bit harder.

this is the exact thing I've done here harold,Tnx!

Quote from: Josh Mings on August 29, 2016, 06:06:34 AM
Overall really good. I'd add a highlight to that grip and the lack of stronger shadow under the gun makes it seem to float a little.

thank you josh

as harold said the light source is from a low angle to the ground plane and as the gun has some pins on the other side, it doesnt sit on the map completely so the light leaks a bit under the gun and makes the shadows brighter but still I have changed some setting and pins to make the shadows darker

Speedster · August 29, 2016, 01:29:49 PM

Yes, I think the subject matter is edgy in these times, but it's not about the backstory, but about the render of a famous pistol. Frankly, I think they are excellent! Perhaps the steel is a tad bright, but I'm not sure about that.

So, even though I may get some flack (a military term!), it does sort of look like a Trump campaign poster...

Bill G

fario · August 30, 2016, 08:09:33 AM

Hello,

sorry, but I am shocked by the subject of your work.

Peace

Hossein Alfideh · August 30, 2016, 10:06:11 AM

Quote from: Speedster on August 29, 2016, 01:29:49 PM
Yes, I think the subject matter is edgy in these times, but it's not about the backstory, but about the render of a famous pistol. Frankly, I think they are excellent! Perhaps the steel is a tad bright, but I'm not sure about that.

So, even though I may get some flack (a military term!), it does sort of look like a Trump campaign poster...

Bill G

Thank you Bill for the feed back!

yeah he's totally out of his mind it really suits him

Quote from: Antoine on August 30, 2016, 08:09:33 AM
Hello,

sorry, but I am shocked by the subject of your work.

Peace

Hi Antonie!
the only reason I used nazi flags is that this pistol is used by them, that's it!
I just wanted to render a famous pistol nothing more ,I have nothing to do with the back story!
people are making movies and video games about killing and war every day and there is no heart feelings ,I'm wondering how you are shocked by this!
I'm just a peaceful guy doing some renders to get feed back from you guys and improve my skills nothing more

take a look at my Barbed wire subject, it's totally about freedom and peace
and at last I'd like you to remember me by this sentence which I truly believe in "War is not the answer, only love can conquer hate"