Audi S5 advertisement test

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September 10, 2016, 06:31:38 AM Last Edit: September 10, 2016, 12:23:25 PM by nilspiirma3d
Been a while, today I got bored again. And we all know what happens when Nils gets bored... :D

Here's a test render I did using evermotion's arch exteriors for cars, the concrete scene.

The bottom one is the one i started out with.

marcusha

#1
September 10, 2016, 08:01:51 AM
Great work, love the lighting setup! But to me it seems like the scale of the texture used on the ground is too big. Makes the sceene look small :)

michaelahybelova

#2
September 10, 2016, 08:04:30 AM
I have to agree with marcusha, texture seems way to scaled. Anyway, gj :)

NM-92

#3
September 10, 2016, 12:25:53 PM
This is one of my favourite renders of yours Nils.

Speedster

#4
September 10, 2016, 12:54:56 PM
Hey, Nils- I agree, this is one of your best, and you always set a very high bar.

This came in some weeks ago from SolidSmack, and I keep wanting to share it with you car guys.  We get inspiration from many sources, as you all know.  I may order this book!  http://www.solidsmack.com/design/automobile-design-graphics-dives-incredible-history-500-automobile-brochures/

Bill G

LayC42

#5
September 11, 2016, 04:46:42 AM
I like the light setup as well the balanced colors. But what did you do with the concrete to get this high reflections? (It reflects like a half mile racing track.)
I would never criticize the car render, 'cause I'm galaxies behind that quality!

I pull my hat (translated german phrase - to show respect)

Nils Piirma

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September 11, 2016, 04:51:58 AM
Quote from: LayC42 on September 11, 2016, 04:46:42 AM
I like the light setup as well the balanced colors. But what did you do with the concrete to get this high reflections? (It reflects like a half mile racing track.)
I would never criticize the car render, 'cause I'm galaxies behind that quality!

I pull my hat (translated german phrase - to show respect)


I used a paint material, added some textures incl. bump map, then played around with refraction and roughness.

Thanks :) and so did I think when i looked at Tim's rendering around 4 years ago, but now I'm thinking that I'm reaching his level of rendering in a year or so :)

Nils Piirma

#7
September 11, 2016, 04:52:29 AM
Quote from: michaelahybelova on September 10, 2016, 08:04:30 AM
I have to agree with marcusha, texture seems way to scaled. Anyway, gj :)

IDK, seems okay for me, the texture map size. Other than that, thanks :)

Nils Piirma

#8
September 11, 2016, 04:52:48 AM
Quote from: NM-92 on September 10, 2016, 12:25:53 PM
This is one of my favourite renders of yours Nils.


Thank you :)!

Nils Piirma

#9
September 11, 2016, 04:53:50 AM
Quote from: Speedster on September 10, 2016, 12:54:56 PM
Hey, Nils- I agree, this is one of your best, and you always set a very high bar.

This came in some weeks ago from SolidSmack, and I keep wanting to share it with you car guys.  We get inspiration from many sources, as you all know.  I may order this book!  http://www.solidsmack.com/design/automobile-design-graphics-dives-incredible-history-500-automobile-brochures/

Bill G

In terms of setting the bar high, Still, there a tons of people out there that can do way better than me, in terms of the book, whooosh, i'mma get me one too :) some really great ideas in there :)
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