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Started by asspaula, July 24, 2017, 06:22:45 PM

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asspaula

I'm a beginner at keyshot
I created this simple scene
I would like your opinions on what I can improve
Attached to the scene

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B7lyHkuy6IvMNDltWjF6ZW5fVGc?usp=sharing

furqan aslam

Lighting density littel bit high and reflection focus of light is sharp edge. is not sharp so understand.make a new render.
All the best.

Will Gibbons

The blanket/quilt texture seems to be off. Are you using normal projection? May want to change it to UV texture mapping if you got this model online and it has UVs assigned.

nicordf

It´s a good start for sure, but I would tweak the lights to get a more moody, focused lighting scheme. The chair on the left looks out of it´s place as well.
:)

SebasDesign

I agree with Will and nicordf, it's a nice start and a cool scene but the lighting could be tweaked a bit to set a better mood and the chair looks weird there. Also, like Will pointed out, looks like you proyected the bed texture from above so the sides look wrong like the texture is bleeding.