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Started by ada, November 27, 2011, 05:43:43 PM

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ada

HDRLightStudio is what I used to create the dome.
Keyshot 3 for rendering. ;)

I'm happy with the results.
Please critique and let me know what you feel needs to be change or worked on more.
;)

feher

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Very nice indeed my friend ! I don't think the DOF is working on this image.
Like the lighting, the only thing I would look at is adding some pin line hi-lights on some bends. That will give it that extra pop.
Other then that, it's a keeper in my book.
Tim


Here is an example of the pin line hi-lights I was talking about. Just something to think about.

PhilippeV8

nevermind this topic should be more orange then red ... I like it :)

ada

Quote from: feher on November 27, 2011, 06:47:30 PM
Very nice indeed my friend ! I don't think the DOF is working on this image.
Like the lighting, the only thing I would look at is adding some pin line hi-lights on some bends. That will give it that extra pop.
Other then that, it's a keeper in my book.
Tim


Here is an example of the pin line hi-lights I was talking about. Just something to think about.

Is really a good suggestion ;)

Zander85

I agree with feher about the depth of field and the pop light. I think the focus of the depth of field needs to at least include the passenger mirror. Also I am with philippe about the red looking pretty orange. Also I think your car paint shader could use some more speckles/flakes. 
Also I would re-light/adjust the front bumber where I circled. This is a distracting reflection that does not flatter the beauty of the car IMHO.

The wheel well looks incredible. Great work there!

bobyoung