Several different shots!

Started by Tomas, June 19, 2012, 10:42:27 PM

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Tomas

Hello,

I'm new here, but I'll try to give some of my shots  :)
In this forum is very much a professional Shots. It's a good possibility to share and and get the experience from a professionals  :)

My shots:

1. Bmw vision efficient dynamics
2. "minority report" lexus
3. Dodge charger
3. Bmw m3
4. Mercedes SL 500

Waiting for Your comments :) There are many mistakes in some images, but I am learning each rendering :D

Josh3D

Hi Tomas. Welcome! Looking pretty good! My comments:

The cars are just a bit too sharp, standing out, from the backplate.
The images of the cars in the warehouses look great.
The cars on the black and white images almost blend too much.
The last B&W's are great though if you're not trying to draw attention to the car, but using it to add more depth to the image.

Definitely keep at it!

Josh

youknowwho4eva

Did you use STL for the first ones? you can really see the triangulation.

tsunami

Quote from: youknowwho4eva on June 20, 2012, 10:17:48 AM
Did you use STL for the first ones? you can really see the triangulation.
i think he is using low polygons models,..i suppose ...

Tomas

Hello,

Thank You josh3d! Your comments very important for me :)
When I am doing multiple jobs at once, sometimes I don't notice my mistakes :/

Tomas

Tomas

Quote from: youknowwho4eva on June 20, 2012, 10:17:48 AM
Did you use STL for the first ones? you can really see the triangulation.

yap, I used low polygons models, but it just BMW :) This mistake I hide in grayscale, like first BMW image, but image isn't bad :)


Tomas

Tomas

Just for fun  ;D


guest84672

Definitely some great shots in this thread!

Josh3D

Would like to see that last one animated ;)

Tomas

Quote from: josh3d on June 21, 2012, 07:08:28 AM
Would like to see that last one animated ;)
I will try to do animation, but first I want to finish the next part :) :) :)