Fruits ....

Fredlynzz · July 05, 2013, 12:59:43 AM

hey guys I'm here testing some fruits i did a few months ago now trying it with keyshot ...

PhilippeV8 · July 05, 2013, 01:02:28 AM

That's the best fruits I've seen up here to date.

Maybe the lighting makes it look a bit flat'ish ... but textures sure are great !

Fredlynzz · July 05, 2013, 01:04:56 AM

thanks man still working on the lighting trying to get a grip of this keyshot ....

PhilippeV8 · July 05, 2013, 01:11:38 AM

Also the material for the liquid might need some tweeking

Fredlynzz · July 05, 2013, 03:42:17 AM

updated..... i did some tweaks

tsunami · July 05, 2013, 04:13:45 AM

Real very very nice, awesome work..i like it..

PhilippeV8 · July 05, 2013, 04:16:14 AM

As your colors got more yellow, your mint doesn't look as mint as it did (pun intended).

Further more, why not show the entire square plate with fruit in the center ?

PS: add some vanilla ice and I'll order one from ya

Speedster · July 05, 2013, 06:10:14 AM

And perhaps just a tiny bit more shadow definition to separate the elements? Try tweaking in KS Edit, or a clown pass and some drop shadow layers (very slight!) in Photoshop?

+1 on the ice cream! It's 6:00 AM here, and I'm already hungry!

Bill G

PhilippeV8 · July 05, 2013, 06:30:04 AM

Yes, adding some shadows and/or glossy highlights was mostly why I said to edit the lighting.

Fredlynzz · July 05, 2013, 02:56:19 PM

well here i pushed it further and added a flower ...

Speedster · July 05, 2013, 03:56:23 PM

The fruit, flower and leaves are great, but I still think it needs dimension and definition with some shadow. Have you tried other HDR's, or one that you can tweak I edit? Don't forget, you can block out a portion of an HDR with a "dark light", by adding a pin and setting it at a negative value.
Bill G

Ed · July 05, 2013, 04:43:51 PM

Have to agree here. The fruit looks like a Photoshop cut-out on top of a plate layer. Need to tie it all together. The lighting looks very even so there are no shadows and very little reflections in the plate, making it look flat. Try going with two smaller light sources on a darker background for the HDRI. This is an indoor scene, so cloudy diffuse HDRIs should be avoided.

Ed

Fredlynzz · July 06, 2013, 05:58:41 PM

thanks guy for the valuable input this is how far i got... had fun with it

Speedster · July 07, 2013, 06:27:29 AM

Oh ya! Sweet and ready to enjoy! Glad you stuck with it!
Bill G

Fredlynzz · July 07, 2013, 06:44:40 AM

Thanks man its all the valuable input i got that helped